Confusion

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Blood soaked tears streak across a face that has no smile
He waits and watches and cries
A lonely demon in a fiery hell
Bleeding, hurting, wanting to die
He wonders aloud where he is
And a familiar face appears
The face of his lover, the face of his love
And her voice is all he hears
"I love you." she tells him
And he says he loves her back
"Close your eyes." she whispers softly
He watches as she attacks
He can see her face and he calls her name
But as soon as he says it, she fades
Did she do this to him?
Over and over it's replayed
Blood soaked tears that will not dry
And a love that still rings true
Echo throughout the pits of Hell
As he screams, "WHAT DID I DO?"

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